Hello all!
Just recently got done with my book review for 680 and
learned a lot of cool things about the writing process from my dear old friend,
Peter Elbow. Aside from having an excellent name, Mr. Elbow talked about a cool
revising process called the Cut-and-Paste revising. In this process the
students, after writing a rough draft, cut apart their paper and piece together
a revised edition using only the best parts. After they have used all their
pieces they connect the parts they need to using transition sentences and,
voila, a finished draft! I really enjoyed reading about his process and hope to
implement it in my classroom when I become a full-time teacher. It is a great
was for students to participate in a hand on activity and still be able to see
that they are good writers.
His book offered a great many insights about the writing
process. Another one is the ways he encourages students to develop voice in
their writing. One process that he discusses is the having students write
poetry that doesn’t focus on punctuation or grammar. The point is to write a
poem that gets the stuck ideas out of their head and onto the paper. This idea
is one that I wouldn’t use for all of my students but it would be great thing
to use if you were teaching a creative writing class or as an option for
prewriting. The other option that he discusses is often an obvious but a method
I think many teachers and writers forget. Reading a paper out loud often alerts
students to grammatical errors they make in their paper but it can also alert
the students to when their paper becomes boring or sounds too scripted, for
lack of a better word.
I would definitely recommend this book to any writer or
teacher. It offers great strategies and activities for every step of the
writing process. The first step you need to take to be a good teacher of
writing is to become more familiar with the way that you write.
Three shorts weeks and the final semester of college will be
over (for many of us). Right now all I can think about is what will I do next,
I’m almost done with school but some of the most stressful years of my life
await me in the next few months. Will I get that job? Is everything turned in?
When I feel that I am becoming overwhelmed with the stress I put on a Beatles’
album think of one of my favorite quotes from an exceptionally brilliant man,
John Lennon.
Just recently got done with my book review for 680 and
learned a lot of cool things about the writing process from my dear old friend,
Peter Elbow. Aside from having an excellent name, Mr. Elbow talked about a cool
revising process called the Cut-and-Paste revising. In this process the
students, after writing a rough draft, cut apart their paper and piece together
a revised edition using only the best parts. After they have used all their
pieces they connect the parts they need to using transition sentences and,
voila, a finished draft! I really enjoyed reading about his process and hope to
implement it in my classroom when I become a full-time teacher. It is a great
was for students to participate in a hand on activity and still be able to see
that they are good writers.
His book offered a great many insights about the writing
process. Another one is the ways he encourages students to develop voice in
their writing. One process that he discusses is the having students write
poetry that doesn’t focus on punctuation or grammar. The point is to write a
poem that gets the stuck ideas out of their head and onto the paper. This idea
is one that I wouldn’t use for all of my students but it would be great thing
to use if you were teaching a creative writing class or as an option for
prewriting. The other option that he discusses is often an obvious but a method
I think many teachers and writers forget. Reading a paper out loud often alerts
students to grammatical errors they make in their paper but it can also alert
the students to when their paper becomes boring or sounds too scripted, for
lack of a better word.
I would definitely recommend this book to any writer or
teacher. It offers great strategies and activities for every step of the
writing process. The first step you need to take to be a good teacher of
writing is to become more familiar with the way that you write.
Three shorts weeks and the final semester of college will be
over (for many of us). Right now all I can think about is what will I do next,
I’m almost done with school but some of the most stressful years of my life
await me in the next few months. Will I get that job? Is everything turned in?
When I feel that I am becoming overwhelmed with the stress I put on a Beatles’
album think of one of my favorite quotes from an exceptionally brilliant man,
John Lennon.

Writing with Power by Peter Elbow ISBN: 978195120189
Gage,
ReplyDeleteI think this cut and paste revision sounds interesting and can't wait to see you teach it in 680 for micro-teaching. I thought it was funny because I really liked my book too, and decided to post on it... HA! My book also talked about not focusing on punctuation and grammar, which is NOT what I was taught in school, and I still have HORRIBLE grammar, so I guess it really doesn't help =)I think our generation of teachers really have to examine the differences of needs of students and adapt to those.
Nice quote of John Lennon... LOVE IT!
---Whitney
Ah, English 680, now that was a class of sorts. I think you picked up on one of the authors that really stuck with me as well. Reading through your post I remember many of Mr. Elbow's strategies that you mentioned above. It really is amazing how many different methods there are to get the ideas onto paper, and how unconventional many of them often seem. I think you're absolutely right in noting that some methods might be more appropriate than others, and offering up several options for pre-writing activities is a great idea.
ReplyDeleteAnd now after reading Whitney's comments I have many "grammarian vs anti-grammarian" arguments from that class flooding back to me. Time to walk away from the computer for now.